rayc
retroreprobate
The link goes to a 2012 recording of a song that Eric & I wrote in 1976. Eric supplied the 12 string, electric lead lines and vocals whilst I did the other guitars and bass.
The vocals aren't strong and will need to be retracked and the drums are my old mid 80's Roland drum machine and could happily be replaced.
Given the above how does the mix sound?
Would female backing vocals be any good?
Any commentary is most welcome.
Version 2
to download the 10mg file
Version 2 too
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=469622&songID=12078602
to play the soundclick streamer.
VERSION 3
streamer
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=12081436&q=hi
download
ALICE
Alice says the clouds are coming down
They will wash the tears from your eyes
But what will you do when I am gone?
And the clouds are coming down
What will you do when it’s all gone
When your supply is finished?
What went wrong?
Alice says the clouds are coming down again
Alice says the clouds are coming down again
A figure in the rain
A life alone
Thoughts like rain
Fall on the ground
Alice says the clouds are coming down again
Alice says the clouds are coming down
I can’t find a light
To illuminate your life
Alice says the clouds are coming down.
One ruined picture on the mantelpiece
Cracked in glass and cracked in brain
Splinters on the floor all that remain
Alice says the clouds are coming down again
Walking on a misty night
And stepping in my tears
Alice says the clouds are coming down
Waking on a moonless night
And sleeping with my tears
Thoughts of you are painful
Bringing forth the rain of years
The moon a globe reflecting light
The light of life and love
Alice says the clouds are coming down
Eclipsed the moon no longer shines
But I resist the cold caress
Alice says the world is coming down
Alice says the world is coming down
The vocals aren't strong and will need to be retracked and the drums are my old mid 80's Roland drum machine and could happily be replaced.
Given the above how does the mix sound?
Would female backing vocals be any good?
Any commentary is most welcome.
Version 2
to download the 10mg file
Version 2 too
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=469622&songID=12078602
to play the soundclick streamer.
VERSION 3
streamer
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=12081436&q=hi
download
ALICE
Alice says the clouds are coming down
They will wash the tears from your eyes
But what will you do when I am gone?
And the clouds are coming down
What will you do when it’s all gone
When your supply is finished?
What went wrong?
Alice says the clouds are coming down again
Alice says the clouds are coming down again
A figure in the rain
A life alone
Thoughts like rain
Fall on the ground
Alice says the clouds are coming down again
Alice says the clouds are coming down
I can’t find a light
To illuminate your life
Alice says the clouds are coming down.
One ruined picture on the mantelpiece
Cracked in glass and cracked in brain
Splinters on the floor all that remain
Alice says the clouds are coming down again
Walking on a misty night
And stepping in my tears
Alice says the clouds are coming down
Waking on a moonless night
And sleeping with my tears
Thoughts of you are painful
Bringing forth the rain of years
The moon a globe reflecting light
The light of life and love
Alice says the clouds are coming down
Eclipsed the moon no longer shines
But I resist the cold caress
Alice says the world is coming down
Alice says the world is coming down
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