First off, I'm lstening on iPad speakers, so take that into consderation.
I love harmony, and this is decent, but the blend is not great. Baritone/bass voice is a bit unpleasant and pierces through. Might want to back that down a bit. Tenor solo is pretty much out of the vocalist's range. I don't catch it in the harmonies, but it is very obvious in the solo. Not sure what you can do there.
Guitar sounds pretty good. And the vocalist carrying the lead part has a nice voice. All in all, not bad. I'd play with the blend, both volumes and eq, to try and sweeten it up a bit.
Good performance of an under-rated song. I agree about the baritone voice, it could come back a bit. Not in dB's, but in steps backwards from the mic. I can hear a lot of the room during the lead vocalists part. The guitar sounded a little thin, but I'm used to hearing the original with several guitars playing. If you were to do redo it, I suggest using m/s recording of the guitar. That would be sweet.
Cool. Great job for a 20 minute step-up-to-the-mic-and-sing kinda song.
For one microphone, it was very good.
A bit of a boxy sound in the vocals. And a very distant sound on the guitar. But with one mic, it's kind of expected.
Doesn't sound like the room was the best.
For what it's worth, when my group recorded stuff like this we woukd start exactly the way you did. Everything captured in one take. But afterwards I would have everyone re-sing their part individually, singing along to the original track. That provided an isolated track for each vocalist. No bleed from the other singers (except maybe headphine bleed), and allowed you to blend, eq, etc., to your heart's content. Also allowed you to patch any individual mistakes if need be. But still retained a lot of that live feel.
sounds like there were quite a few clipping spots. did you catch those? guitar once or twice, and then some weird ones near the last minute.
great vocals dude. i'd like to hear it with the track sung individually, then mixed, as suggested above
Good ears. We got very close at spots and I feared we'd done so.
We will be redoing this on individual mikes tonight ... but for the baritone, a national sales director who is traveling on business. I will post up the new version when complete.
Right around 1:55 was when the clips got really bad on the Soundcloud version.
I think you're aware of the limits of this technique and where it's hindering your "mix" specifically.
+1 on what everyone else has said. The guitar is weak; the room is very audible, especially during the tenor solo; the tenor's voice is a little harsh; the low voices are dominating. But this is an excellent performance, and for one mic you got really good results.