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    2 pop songs; please listen

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    OK, here are a couple of my tunes. I recorded them, played and sang everything. Please listen and critique. You can click each CD title to get a downloadable tune from each.
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    Michael
    http://www.brefrow.com/mikebutler

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    The link doesnt work for me.

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    Nope, got another link?

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    hmmmm. sorry guys. the sight's under a lot of construction. maybe that's why we can't reach it presently.

    thanks for trying. i'll get back w/ ya.

    m

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    Michael,

    I like the song "Days of our lives". Very nice!

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    nice pop song.........well mixed

    no real suggestions ..........good job

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    Michael,

    I like the song "Days of our lives". Very nice!

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    I listened to Angles on the Scene.

    Nice music. I liked the harmonies and the overall feel of it. I liked the acoustic guitar sound. I liked the vocal tone throughout. Big sound - plenty loud.

    The spot where the big sound kicked in at 1:20 was cool, but it seemed a little late in the tune to get the best effect out of it. Maybe put the first two verses together (without a chorus) and kick it in at the second verse. Or just kick it in during the first chorus. Just thoughts.

    Maybe a little too loud in the midrange. Vocals in spots were a little tough to hear. The drum intro and outro was a little on the harsh side.

    A very minor vocal sync issue at about :52 (the telephone voice doesn't come in at the same time as the main vocal. Again, very minor. Almost not worth mentioning.

    Nice song.

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    angels on the scene

    Really nice feel. The song progresses and builds and kind of flowers unexpectedly; I like that. The bass is a tad boomy, and I agree with MMM that the field gets kinda crowded in the middle. I would experiment with panning, eq and plain ol' volume. Vocal definitely gets swallowed at times. I like the vocal tone, but at times I thought I was hearing different effects; like first reverb, then delay....not sure...

    I won't say anything about the haircut

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    thanks for listening folks. i agree, the vox are a bit buried at times. i've never really liked my voice that much.

    good input about kick-in moments too.

    any other comments would be greatly appreciated.

    thanks again.

    m

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