my song

[panmusicman]

Hello!
Recently has written music for a song! I wish to hear criticism on this music and on mix! I do not like a bass and a Kick!

http://www.sendspace.com/file/htffoc

What else there are similar forums where musicians communicate?

 

[tlennon1]

Like the mix and song alot. Keep up the good work.

 

[NYMorningstar]

Try posting your song in the MP3 clinic for review.
https://homerecording.com/bbs/forumdisplay.php?f=15
Give a review or two for some songs there and you'll get plenty of reviews in return.

I listened on phones. You have a nice clean sound with the acoustic but I think adding a bassline and some vocals would make a big difference. Panning your acoustic all the way right seems to leave a void at the beginning.

 

[panmusicman]

will try to make a little now to another

 

[panmusicman]

Has even more precisely made a mix!

What it is possible to change that the sound was better?

http://www.sendspace.com/file/tlwcnr

 

[panmusicman]

It not live musical instruments certainly, here I used VSTi:

Drums - Battery
Bass - Nexus
Pad - Nexus
String - Nexus
Clean Chorus Guitar - Nexus
Acoustic guitar - Real Guitar
Distortion Guitar - Prominy LPC
Distortion Guitar Solo - Real Strat Guitar + Guitar Rig

 

[cybergord]

Great tune....I love it. Bass and kick sound great to me. Nice work.
cybergord

 

[NYMorningstar]

Sounds better but still seems a bit off center with the acoustics.

 

[panmusicman]

Instead of a melody which game piano will be a female vocal

http://www.sendspace.com/file/d0tbji