Recorded using Ableton Live 8 lite

[Lukesteele]

Hang onto Love - YouTube

[8track]

Hi Lukesteele,

On the whole nice work. If I were producing this ...
I think you may need to look at the vocal: to me there were some tuning issues and the reverb a little too wet. I would have tried to make it a little closer. The mix also was a little muddled - it was a little boomy in places and the drum arrangement may be a little busy.
Hope this helps

[Lukesteele]

Hi 8track! Many thanks for your comments. I think you have addressed all the right issues in the song, as I have had others say almost the same things. Here's a remix: https://soundcloud.com/pentultima/ha...ove-pentultima