Rain falls, what do you guys think?

[Spazhands]

This is a track I wrote years ago but have only just found someone to do the vocals for it. It is not mastered, not sure if its even finished to be honest! I would like your opinions please. Ben

http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12029609&q=hi

 

[Jeo Jetson]

Very soulful, it takes awhile to get started though. Perhaps shorten the intro??

 

[Rockpound]

good work!

 

[Spazhands]

Cheers. Yea the intro used to be much shorter, but I found it didn't set you up very well for when the beat breaks off and the film sample comes in. Just wondering if this track needs anything else? what do you think?

 

[IamRated.com]

nice one

 

[andrew_s]

This is pretty good song, words and the melody. I liked it a lot
Thanks!

 

[wiseintelligent]

really that's not bad

 

[Spazhands]

Thanks guys. I have an idea for a subtle piano part to go on the track, might get on that!

 

[theonlybman]

Damn good start, the bass needs a bit of work, but I like the arrangement a lot.

 

[theonlybman]

You know what I take that back, with the vocals on top the bass fits nice, but I'd get rid of that part where the bass is alone.

 

[Spazhands]

Thanks man. yea I've always been unsure of that bass part on its own. I have come up with a great synth part that would boost that area, update shortly!

 

[YTBeatz]

really soulful! nice rap nd nice beat!