Cool vocal sound, is that a super short reverb and a slap?
Low end might be a tad rumbly in the chorus (could be my phones, though, see what others might say)
Good song overall; nice message, vocal up-front and personal, good arrangement. Nice job on that.
I'd edit out the breath at the end, unless you want to keep it for effect, but it ends kind of abruptly.
Acoustic could maybe use a tad more high-end sparkle, but that's a taste thing.
What mic did you use on the vocal? Acoustic? What kind of acoustic?
Again, nice job, dude.