my new mp3 is up please criticise

[istyle]

it's undulator.mp3 at www.mp3.com/istyle
thnx

[Buck62]

This music could definitely be part of a movie soundtrack. It's a cool tune, I really liked it.
The mix was pretty good, but the only thing that brought the quality of the recording down a notch was the sound of the canned drums. I thought they could have been eq'd better to get a crispier, more present sound.
Besides that, the arrangement and keyboards were excellent.
You could easily promote "undulator" as music for extreme-sports video clips or for one of those high-action Japanimation flicks.

[gibs]

What a great mix....everything sounded right where it should in my opinion....I do wish, though that the drum samples would have sounded closer to real....nice job.....gibs

[istyle]

thnx yes i just switched my gina into my brother P2
so i hadn't much of drumsamples in here
i remix it with new drum
and maybe add some analog synth sound
to it to give it the dark tone of rockmusic
like i got in waroflife.mp3
i think maybe iconcentrate too much on arrangement
that i would notice too late that my drum sucks
have to beware of this issue next time

[istyle]

i did a remix adding fuzz in drum track
and a couple of things
also if you go to my geo HP
you'll see accompanying picture
thnx

[Ray J]

Sounded good to my ears. I'm a little ignorant to this genre, so I won't embarrass myself by giving details about the song or the mix but, I'm impressed, really.