Give it a run

[hugeheffa]

I am looking for some feedback. New to the board so tell me the truth.

Danke

http://www.angelfire.com/hi5/loveazure/58A.mp3

[christiaan]

Welcome to the board.
The appropriate place to post songs is the MP3 Mixing Clinic.
Just scroll down a bit more on the main page and you'll find it.

[hugeheffa]

Are you a moderator or a dick? I asked for feedback not posting instructions. See my other post for another chance to feedback.

Danke

[christiaan]

Read your other post for more instructions

[TexRoadkill]

Originally posted by hugeheffa
Are you a moderator or a dick? I asked for feedback not posting instructions. See my other post for another chance to feedback.

Danke

lol. Looks like we know who the dick is.

I listened to the track. It's gotta lot of bass.

[Jblount]

Settle, no need for the violence. As far as the track, tex is right the bass is just nuts.

[MISTERQCUE]

Originally posted by hugeheffa
Are you a moderator or a dick? I asked for feedback not posting instructions. See my other post for another chance to feedback.

Danke

Yo' home-boy, you'll recieve more reviews, advice and critiques if
you post this jammie of yours in the MP3 forum. Furthermore, ain't no need to drop sh#t on an individual who's trying to direct you to the right path. Feel me!!?? Kool & Peace.

Nice lil,production. Like others stated, drop the bottom 5-6 dbs on the kick or cut @ 70hz. Melodic content is too repetitive. If you throw in a variation or a counter-harmonic/melodic track, it will spice this up a notch. Except for the bottom, your joint is recorded cleanly. There is a lot of potential with this music and additional experimentation with diff synth sounds can make this slammie most chill!

Peace
Q.rM

[hugeheffa]

Hey bro' thanks for the constructive criticism. I apologize for my initial reaction to dude, but he wasn't following instructions.

Thats like me standing in the street begging for dimes and he gives me his bank statement.

[c7sus]

Wow. Folks have to follow YOUR "instructions" here???

That's news to me.

[subtractor]

Truth is... You ARE a fucking dick. And the fact that you only have 5 posts with 500 times that amount in attitude makes it worse.
I listened to your so called "song"...
WTF is that anyway???
It's even more repetitive than the shittiest techno, it sounds like it's straight out of the factory presets on a casio, and as previously mentioned it's WAY heavy on the low end, and all around sounds like shit.

It sounds like a jack in the box that you crank untill the little clown comes out (I assume that would be you) and shoots himself.

Why don't you just crawl back to whatever board you normally hang on and get away with talking to people like that? Lemme guess, VSPlanet? Harmony Central? Or Douchebag.com?

[hugeheffa]

Well I'll be....what a helpful bunch you guys are! This is like getting caught peeking in the girls locker room. What a bunch of bitchs you guys are!

And subtractor...how many songs have you produced? You lifeless geek. If you were any good you be on tour instead of ON-LINE!

DICKS

[subtractor]

Douchebag, I don't have to ever produce a song to know what sounds like shit and what doesn't.
I would have been happy to give positive feed back on how the song could be better, but you my cock breathed friend are straight off your first post nothing more than troll dung...

So fuck off and go somewhere else. Or at least create another screenname and act like a civilized person, and maybe no one will know it's the same dickhead that started a war with everyone on his forth or fifth post.

I'm the person with uncontrollable misdirected anger here... There's not room for two of us!

[hugeheffa]

I am civilized to those who are civilized with me. Its not my fault if you picked a fight that wasn't yours to begin with. But now that you have,....

I bet you feel real good being the "man" on this board don't you?! I know, it's hard to make it in the real world. Much easier to gang up on people rather than just stick to postin' and shuttin the hell up.

It's fags like you that give boards like this a bad name. Word of advice...

Turn off your e-machine, go outside and find a woman or som'n. That's if your a man at all....pussy!

[subtractor]

Originally posted by christiaan
Welcome to the board.
The appropriate place to post songs is the MP3 Mixing Clinic.
Just scroll down a bit more on the main page and you'll find it.

You...

Are you a moderator or a dick? I asked for feedback not posting instructions. See my other post for another chance to feedback.

You are the dick troll boy...
That's what started it. I love lighting into the ass of a green little foul mouthed bitch like you. So do yourself a favor and go fuck off, before I have to flame you.
BTW, I'm far from the "MAN" on this board...
I just don't like arrogant rude little pricks like you that shoot off their mouths to people that are just trying to help.

I gave you your critique Biotch! Get back to the studio, come up with something worth listening to and try again, or at least change your attitude.

What, are you 15 by chance?

[hugeheffa]

I am old enough to be your daddy.....SON.

Go to bed greenday!

[Track Rat]

Wrong forum, shit sack.

[hugeheffa]

Oh no...here comes another one. Are you neglected too?


I have come to understand that argueing on the internet is just like running in the special olympics. No matter who wins, you and your man will still be retarded.

[Track Rat]

Oh, and by the way, what the fuck was that awful noise? It almost sounded like rap music except it was done VERY badly.

[hugeheffa]

I'll tell you the same thing I told your boyfriend subtractor...get a damn life! Mind your own business and crawl back into the whole which you call home...fuckin baldmen, missouri!!!! Farm boy!! Country ass motherfucker!

[christiaan]

He asked for feedback but clearly retarded, fight picking dicks like us can't teach him anything new.

Guys, let this thread just die.