who gives this a listen..?

[groovejunkie]

this is a song I've started six hous ago, and now I don't hear s**t .. so maybe it's just total crap...

anyway, some comments would be nice!
btw - this is for a girl and in german so don't wonder if you don't understand a word


http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/...d=2240&alid=-1


it's called "Blindflug"


thanks!

[Khompewtur]

Hey any song made for a chick is guaranteed to win points in my book. That's a nice gesture, I hope she likes it. Go! Go! Go!

[studioviols]

Number one and MOST importantly I could understand ALL the words on the FIRST LISTEN and no problem ... good job.

du singst ganst bessers als deutsch freund, aber 'Die Appfelnbaum' is gut auch, ich mag ... und auch verde ich die bratsche und etwas machen fur dich ...

I like this song ... the backup vocals are nice.

Make the tracks again for 'Appletree' again please.

At 2:19 these vocals are SEHR GUT, PRIMO !!!

tchuss !

[boydrj]

Not bad for six hours work, you have the basic idea down. It's not total crap, just needs some tightening up. I had a bit of trouble with the low-end on this...I didn't hear very much bass.

The vocals were okay, but may could use a bit of work during the verses. You were much stronger during the chorus...there were a few pitch issues (I'm notorious for this) so maybe just going over it over and over may help.

Not a bad song, just needs a bit of TLC.



p.s. being able to sing in another language - impressive!