http://www.mp3.com/DavidPuzak

[static]

Hey!

This is my first recording...i would just like a few tips and suggestions to help make my recording sound better. Did i do anything wrong? I know the song might suck but is the quality good enough?

Thanks!

[drstawl]

I loved that tune! Thank You! However:
Here is what I found wrong with it.
It's just dying for some melodic addition
as a development in the middle/end.
It's yearning for a vocal track. I kept wondering when that would start.
The timing got sloppy toward the end, and I'm not talking about the slowdown of the tempo that seemed to be part of the tune.
Amp noise showed up at the end that wasn't present at the beginning of the tune.
Otherwise; great job.

[This message has been edited by drstawl (edited 08-04-1999).]

[Dragon]

Can you post the actual URL to the page here? I can't even find you with the search on MP3.com...

[static]

Dragon, in regards to your reply, i have posted the song elswehere: http://members.xoom.com/btbrecords/changes.zip

seeya

[static]

Thanks drstawl! i wrote that song on the spot and made modifications to it while I was recording it. Was it okay to mic the drums with one mic? thats all i think i needed becuase it sounded good to me