"Poetry Club"

[Abyyss]

Aight - lot's of good lyric-writin' been goin' on round here lately, so I figure it'd be cool for us all to have a thread just ta' kick rhymes to each otha (in text) - freestylin' or whateva, any subject. Maybe do some continuation shit too? I know this probably don't belong here but I don't think spin'll mind and if he does then sorry if I've broken any rules. I don't have enough time to write some shit to start this off now, so ya'll gonna have ta' start without me

(I am 5 hours ahead of ya'll, remember)

[Kevlar]

home bbs is a happy home
but for some they're on they're own
i'm my case i'm not alone
i got the right cat's behind
from flossy to jug to cha now pipeline
abyss kicks some i'll rhymes
to pass by wit the time
i steadly am increasing mine
some say that kevlar is too kind
don't take it for weak shit
cuz i'll have a flashback real quick
my head used to be hard like a brick
in one word to discribe me was prick
but i grew up from all negative vibes
i stay so positive, an wanna save lives
i can't do it by myself, sometimes i need some help
i didn't forget about soundboy his beats top shelf
and i know i'm forgettin someone else
thats just my old habits reminding me
lil short term memory but my brains not tiny
most cat's mothers are starvin but rims are shiney
we can all feed off each other, just no cuts in line Gee


a lil something
Peace Love Respect,

Ya Boy Kevlar

[JohnyC]

yO that was pretty ill, but now its my time to spill
words of wisdom, and not the type that make you wanna go out an kill
we're bringing new game to the system
so everbody better stand up an listen
these rhymes will make your mind go twistin
and leave you in a state of confusion
but don't lose
track of sight, cause its all for fun, alright!
and don't fell like you aint got none to contribute
cause in the end we're all just a bunch of goofs
so let loose

[LAZI]

Sweet Nubs style...

Damn I wish I was really all wit it
For reason have no desires to spit it
My first thoughts are to just forget it
Looking at the submit reply like should I bother to hit it
Post this lame little reply that I writ it
Really ain't shit but I did it
Say what the hell and fuck it and grit it
Post up so on your mommas Dell ya'll can get it
Contaminate you brain with my lame bullshit, It
Can go on for days so I should probably quit it
But it's challaging now so I really gotta hit it
Step and show i'm equipped wit
Some skill that if well lipped it
Could show cats i'm actually kinda gift it
Maybe when i'm done some cats will feel uplift it
And take a little time maybe whiles theys spliff it
Maybe entertain the thoughts and skript a quick rift it
Really ain't that bad is you really down wift it?
Boom badda toom i'm a misfit...


Don't worry you'll never see me here again...

[Abyyss]

Lazi,
I'd hate to think you'd pop off an' leave like that,
You're betta than you think so just step right back,
Everybody's got summit ta' say,
So don't even start ta' think about backin' away,
We're all wannabe's so feel no shame,
Else we wouldn't be here touchin' up on our game,
The rest o' ya'll betta come outta hidin',
'Coz my rhymin's buildin' up,
We're all on this roller coaster - you throwin' up?
Please don't add if you a discriminater,
Don't worry, I'ma post some serious shit later.

[Abyyss]

Yo jug ya' killa thug,
Ya' betta get in on this quick,
Before this thread blows up leavin' you behind like the lil' kid,
Lost at the bus stop,
Waitin' for his daddy, 'coz his daddy popped off,
To smoke some weed an' get high,
An' the way home he'll probably die,
Leavin' the kid truely alone,
Lost and barely grown.

[Abyyss]

A freestyle I did on the subject of a song I'm gonna do wit one o' ma' homies - the song's about a bloke who gets smashed an' hires a ho - then gets VD. He liked the freestyle a lot so I ended up usin' it as a base for my realy lyrics:

I can turn and run away now or see the doctor (who dre?),
Naw man, it's far more serious,
Feelin' kinda delirious, always watchin' my back,
Paranoid that you-know-who may come back,
Now I'm sittin', sweatin' in tha doctor's office,
Watchin' him examine the samples checkin' up on ma' shit,
But I know the answer even 'fore he says it,
I'm a dead muthafucka, just face it,
I knew I shouldn't have taken off her thong,
But I could barely see, how's was I supposed to know what was goin' on,
I just gotta take what time I got left and stand stong,
Oh, and just so you know: I got cancer comin' on

[Abyyss]

If I'm so ill then why can't I kill this mic?
Natural born killa,
My rhymes are probably illa than ma' flow,
I ain't denyin' - I know I've got a long way ta' go,
I put my heart into my words,
My soul into a pen,
An' what have I got ta' show for it when I'm gone?
A song?
A lifestyle?
A fucked up mess that's gone wrong?
Should I quit now or back kevlar up?
Heal my soul or this papercut?
Damn, if I knew the answers I wouldn't be here,
Maybe I should consume myself an' disappear,
From the face of the Earth,
But is that all I'm worth?
Grab a glock an' roll off in a hurst?
An' the worst part is the unknown,
Not knowin' what's at the end,
Plus I'm not even fully grown,
Then I truely will be alone.

There ya'll go 4 from me - even if u don't rhyme, contribute!
Nuttin' but love here!

[soundboy]

Yall know i don't rap so this is a first for me. Have at it

yea thats cool but now check my shit
the fire trucks are coming caus they know i'm gone spit
from the the north to the south and back up to the D
That devils night shit got started cause of me
Lyrics like toxin that go strait to ya nerve
you'll get served and swerved like you was an herb on herb
it be like conjunctin junction whats yo function
yea you came out swingin but i come out punchin
they call us home reccers cause thats what we do
be patient and take a number we'll serve that ass to
we reck yo crew we wreck yo shop
we take you spot and we make hot
dam what came next i forgot (oh )
we send you crying to yo pop
speechles like you was Poppa Dot
you need to watch yo mouth from the west to the east
Cause the last thing you want is for me to "UNLEASH THE BEAST"
thats right this just the front line you dont want to go further
you think i hurt ya them cats only know murder
Juagalo ,..... Lazi,...... Kevlar,...... and Abyss
"When you come for the Kings You best not miss"
I didnt forget Chalin just didnt wanna speak his name
cause he on some matrix shit now thats gone redefine pain
and you dont want they full attention by the way that you look
cause you aint even got past me and i can tell that you shook

[jugalo180]

rudy raymore style off the dome.


good evening brothers and sisters,
i'm going to share a few words
from the french quarter streets
to the D.C. burbs
i've seen mother#$kers come
and mother#$kers go
i've seen sand
i've seen rain
i've seen grass
i've seen snow
i've dealt crack
i've dealt weed
even[2sec pause] pumpkin mother$%kin seeds
[raises voice in the next line and stumps feet on stage with each capitolised word]
BUT I'VE NEVER, EVER given five dollars to a two dollar hoe
but last night this bitch wanted three dollars mo
i said "GRAB YOUR PANTIES AND DON'T FORGET YOUR BRA,
just because you have the biggest ass and titties that i ever saw
doesn't mean i'm going to give you a penny mo
than two dollars
you two dollar hoe.

[Abyyss]

Thanx to every1 who's contributed - keep 'em comin'!

You don't have to freestyle if u can't do that, take as long as u want wit ur words.

This is goin' well.

[LiquidBronze]

i could care less about your gold chains and ice
rappers dressing like woman, acting "martha stewart" nice
probably never even was read to as a child
thats why thier vocabulary is mild
take a pin prick of blood back to my lab
clone you, and raise you as my kid
teach you all about life
while the other is pretending he used to hold gats
acting all hard
its all a act
i can see right through
but now i have my perfect genetic MC
to do with as i choose
insert the master plan into his mental
have him kill off the other
and ryhme on his wack instrumental
all the fake cats that used to listen to his fake ass
dont understand why he changed
why he aint rhyming about club hopping and fame
this shit dont make sense
hes rhyming about stopping time and living forever
just through the power of thought
the power of now
its mine and yours choice
to accept this higher conscious thinking
or be left in the dust
when the 4 horse men come ringing



peace
LB

[Abyyss]

^


Keep it up every1.

[Abyyss]

I expect a good few more posts by the time I come back on here

Come on you producers: stop hidin' behind ya' keyboard!

If u've already posted u can post again - FEEL THE FREEDOM

[jugalo180]

http://www.nowhereradio.com/loueazy/singles

you have to give tribute to the king of hip hop poetry. the second track

[jake-owa]

I been burnt out by hitting record all day
I need to chill out it's time for me to hit play
I took it hard, through a slot on a soundcard
To come alive, yeah thrive on harddrive
I'm a busdriver and a bartender, I will survive and I can't surrender
Light bender.....

Short but neat was packing heat he took it sweet to the sound of a beat

I suck at this shit it's miss or hit my brain goes bubble but my fingers just type it
I got a line to kill the time ...........reason is fine but rhyme sublime

[Kevlar]

i guess no one else wants to post
i can't let this trend become toast
i will feel partly responable cuz i busted first
haters keep drinkin hateraid to quench yo thirst
while I let my rhymes dispurse, all over the earth
just like some sperm, i hope no one gets germs
i never hit it raw dog, when will cat's learn
to dodge the perms, of hot hoes that burn
your dick, first it starts wit that itch, then comes drips
time to see the doc real quick, help me i'm sick!
it's not a cough or cold, my shit is startin to grow mold
why is it everytime i see taco, i lose control?
doc say's i dunno? but you should pistol wipp that hoe
when you get back home, take these pills for your bone
just know that your not alone, i think i hit the same bitch,how did
she moan?

[Abyyss]

Ha. Even Jake-owa gettin' in on this?

Good work fellaz.

Originally posted by jugalo180
http://www.nowhereradio.com/loueazy/singles

you have to give tribute to the king of hip hop poetry. the second track

Good lookin', jug.

[jake-owa]

Originally posted by Abyyss
Ha. Even Jake-owa gettin' in on this?

Good work fellaz.



Good lookin', jug.

What I can't hang? With your gang, your G thang?
Was I too damn white to be typin here last night?
Poetry is more to me than you will ever know you G
I hit when you least expect it to quick to be corrected
You and your snowshoe crew are through
Wait till you see what I planned for you
I got a mouthful of lines that are spillin out my mind
You think you're doin fine but when I shine you go blind
This shit is way too easy my rhymes are thin and greasy
But I got nothin left to run on so I guess this is where I stop

Stop, drop and rock and roll
I'll bomb this hole
Get ya ass off the dole
Livin like a mole
Bug eyed at the screen
Living a dull dream
The typist hip-hop team
All see me come and scream


This is fun....

[Abyyss]

Ha. Maybe u should change style's jake?

Thanks for playin.

[jake-owa]

Here's an old short one....kinda funny

"Busted"

-Daily planner
Police scanner
Ten lifetimes of bad manners
Kickin down doors
Payin off whores
Every boy an his mutha want
More more more

I gotta investment broker
On a leash and choker
My ole lady just keeps beggin me to poke her

I got the whole damn world under my thumb
The cops in this town are jus so damn dumb
(siren sound)-

[Abyyss]

Good work.

Keep 'em comin'.

An' that goes for everyone else, too - let's see what ya'll got!

I'm particularly keen to see what some of the followin' can come up wit:

NickSpringfield
Stray (if he comes back on - he's been off 4 a while, rec'in' etc.)
Mr. Sol (not his forté but it'd be cool to see)
Flossyboy
Voxvender (another itchy bum one please )
muzakal
Beathoven (though I haven't seen him round here for a while)
GEC (ditto)

And anyone else - don't be a spoil-sport!

[Abyyss]

**Off topic**

Been checkin' ur shit out, jake - I like it a lot.

I've always wanted to play the guitar, I bought one but could never quite pick it up (kept snappin' my strings so lost morale)

**On topic**

C'mon people - kick sum rhymes!

[Abyyss]

C'mon guys, don't chicken out now - this is where everyone shows what the board has to offer! Don't worry about it not being good; not everybody on the board is good!

[jake-owa]

Originally posted by Abyyss
**Off topic**

Been checkin' ur shit out, jake - I like it a lot.

I've always wanted to play the guitar, I bought one but could never quite pick it up (kept snappin' my strings so lost morale)

**On topic**

C'mon people - kick sum rhymes!

Hey man, thanks!