Flow Change Wit Cha's Help

[Kevlar]

Oh shit son ! I think i've come a long way wit my flow...
This is only for honest critique and for those who have listened to my style/flow before. Or if not you can peep my ol' shit it's on the same page. Let me know what you think? Peace Love Respect


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"two verses new flow" i think it's the forth one down ..peace

Ya Boy Kevlar

[jugalo180]

to give you a good review i would have to hear you spit over a beat that better suits you. to me it sounds like you were spittin over somethin you weren't feelin. do me a favor an snatch an instrumental that makes the hair on the back of your neck stand up, and spit that same rhyme to it. post it on there for me. you workin with the right dudek, cha is the nig.

[Abyyss]

Try this beat

Ur flow has improved a lot - b4 u sounded like someone kinda new 2 tha game, now ur beginnin' ta' sound like the ol' masta (which is what u want) - u wan' 'em ta' feel like u've done this 4eva - it's really comin' on, do it 2 a diff. beat like jug said so we can really hear tha change.

[chalin27]

Yo I'm feel'n man your get'n it man. That was on point I was feel'n but I guess you should have used premier other beat the moment of truth though. It's funny though cats probably didn't reconized it's a premier track. U should have waited til I hooked u up with one of my own son. But I think you close man you just got to connect with my crew so we can take u to level where you wanna be at. Hit me up on soon. The wifey just got back so I've haven't been on in a minute but in week or so I'll be back in action.

One.

[Kevlar]

yo i'm gonna hook it up wit a new beat prob this evening because i gotta work all damn night but i'm glad to see i'm grasping the concept a little now.. Cha, i kind of figured your ol' lady was back in town...i'm sure that will take a burden or your chest now also. I'll look for you on IM ....so keep it real an thanks for replying to my post fella's peace hold it down.
Peace Love Respect,



Ya Boy Kevlar