Whats WRONG With These TRACKZ...?

[Devilfire]

these are some experimental joint i came up with , passed it around and im not getting any feedback ..none

so any feedback or critisim is welcome , what wrong or right with these joints
check the drum programming....


http://www.nowhereradio.com/beats/singles

[Hi_D_Ho_Man]

1. a lil abstract for my taste

2. this is cool, has an old wu-tang feel

3.dont like the drums here

4. Sounds like Drumline meets Hannibal

5. wierd, good sounds , odd arrangement

6. nah, see # 1

7.kinda DnB , but i'm digging it sometimes i get a kick outta shit like this

[Abyyss]

I'ma peep these out sometime in the followin' week 'coz I'm in a "can't be bothered" mood at the moment - nuthin' personal.

[Abyyss]

Aight, basically ur beats sound too plain - u got tha drums and melody, u need lots of bass and lot's more elements - extra melodys running on top, change-ups - try just holding one note on, it can have a dramatic effect to how a piece sounds. U need 2 develop ur melodys a bit more. Just lots more elements and ur beats won't be bare - how 'bout different sections? Hook? Bridge? Experiment. What u got ain't bad, but this is the next step.

[Devilfire]

good feedback... see THIS is why i come to this board.. raw truth!

Abyyss:
your input will be very helpful , ill try some of your suggestions to the best of my ability


Hi_D_Ho_Man:
Im glad your enjoying my work and thanks for the insight !

after all these are experimental tracks


PLZ Keep the feedback comming !

[JadionMusic]

Dude I was not feeling that stuff AT ALL! I am from the west coast originally and MANY people on this site are east coast stuff. The tracks were insanely monotonous and very non melodic. I could see some east coats rappers on it, but none that sell millions. sorry man. But Hey, for every unstatisfied, there is another huge fan.

[Devilfire]

JaidonMusid

good point i think this board is mostly east coast , but all veiws are welcome and valuable , its cool too see how other reigons react to the same music

thanks for the feedback

[Abyyss]

Being from tha UK I guess I have an advantage, I listen 2 all types 'coz UK's version of hip-hop that's on top is garage, which I can't stand. Personally, quite a west coast person myself but I can feel other types as well.

Oh, and good luck.

[Devilfire]

from what i understand the U.K. does have a deeper understanding of real hip hop

[Abyyss]

As far as charts/mainstream is concerned it has quite bad taste (Ja Rule, Nelly - though it is gettin' betta), but everythin' else u get a good mix of everythin' - UK feels many types.

There are lots of hip-hop headz ova here, really inta' hip-hop an' even normal people who would be expected to hate rap buy some of tha betta stuff - so I guess we do have a deeper undastandin'.

[Devilfire]

i dont listen anything manistream over here ...Ja Rule, Nelly are just wack !
the radiostations loop the same song every 10-20 minutes a day

my style is a little hard to get by some people but its all good.

everyone wants to hear a certain sound these days..............
i guess im still stuck in 1993

[Devilfire]

some people must not have anything to say.....70 views