my latest recording! please tell me what i need...

[ad0lescnts]

hey guys,
I just finished recording this band. i'm not especially partial tot his type of music, or their performance but I was hoping you guys could give me some feedback. it's kind of emo pop punk stuff...

http://www.davric.net/Davric - Seventeen.mp3

(sorry you're gonna have to copy and paste)

anyways... i fixed the first background "whoa" but i havent gotten a chance to mix it yet...

and i hate the guitar sound... it sounds so muddy! listen to it and tell me what i can do to fix it???

thanks a lot guys!! (and girls?)
T

[groovejunkie]

nice song - has the "seventeen" power - though, could barely hear the kick, and the snare imo is too loud (even sound like a bongo) - that's all, cool job!

cheers