Where to go from here...

[Ivo V.]

Hi,

I'm working on this smooth jazz instrumental track and I'm kinda stuck.

http://home.planet.nl/~verberk/chillin.mp3

Do you guys have any suggestions on what I might do next or changes in what I have so far ?

thanks for helping out!

Greetz,
Ivo

[Smokepole]

|C#m7|G#m7|C#m7|Bma7|
|C#m7|G#m7|C#m7|D#7|

or instead you could change the last two chords to Bbm7-Eb7 for another flavor.

Sounds kinda bluesy! Nice song.

I just finished a song of the same style if you care to check it out.

Picture This www.nowhereradio.com/mytunes/singles

Joe

[flash2ace]

hey i realy like this bluesy jazz stuff, sounds very interesting. as far as where to go next i would say smokepole pretty much covered it. i like this alot good luck on finishing it. god bless tim pate.

[auburncatfish]

Maybe work on making it less synthetic sounding. You could be going for that. The drum beat and keys give off a synthic nature. You might want that though.

[Ivo V.]

Thanks for the reply's guys!

I'll try some things and let you know how it turns out.

Greets,
Ivo

[B.SABBATH]

I really like the groove..

As far as where to go next.. I can't read or write music, so I can't write down what I think you should do.. I think adding vocals to this would be cool..

good groove.. I almost recognize the drums.. are you using acid?

[Ivo V.]

I've updated my song somewhat with some modulation
Lemme know what you think of this.

greetz,
ivo