New Shining Hathaway Song ... Your comments gentlemen

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Greetings again from the Philippines!

Stranded in the Ocean on a Ship of Fools

As always, I come to the sages here to ask for advice and tell me what I did wrong this time. Its the second song on the page, please tell me what you think.

Recorded with the usual cheap gear with the saving grace of having used an SM58 on the kick drum and vocals.

Thanks in advance!