tried mixing another song check it out

[jugalo180]

it is the same beat as the calm him down song with a little remix, but the rap and hook is totally different. peep it out and let me know what needs to be done to this mix to make it sound better.

i respect all honesty so let me know what ever may be the problem, the lyrics what ever just holla back. the song is called hit em.

http://www.nowhereradio.com/loueazy/singles

[Layla Nahar]

Here are some thoughts:

rap & hip-hop I hear mostly the stuff that's in high rotation - I don't


Calm him down:
I'm not sure what your shooting for here, but some of the background sounds just aren't working. THe intro is confusing, it just doesn't come together, and the bullfrog sound doesn;t work for me


Hit Em
This is good - the words are good the rapper's voice and delivery are really ... present. The background sounds are a little less confusing than the previous song, and the bullfrog sound isn't quite as distracting. The sound is maybe a little thin.


I wish
Well, since this title already exists, you need to play with it a little - Its alright to pay tribute, but in addition to it being confusing (people will think they are getting a different song) you might face some copyright issues. Again, the sound is a bit thin. Unfortunately, although I'm in a position to tell you what just not hitting me right, I don;'t have enuf knowledge to make useful suggestions to you.

Who is rapping, is that you? I like the raps & the delivery, great prescence

Layla

ps: Maybe yoiu need access to some different sounds? I think you might need to expand your vocabulary on the beats.

[jugalo180]

damn, that is what i've been waiting for. i appreciate you taking some time to critique my songs. yes, that is me rapping. i'm a humble mc, and i appreciate all advice, negative or positive, just as long as it's tasteful. i will definitely take everything you have said into consideration. when ever i find time to redo the songs i hope you'll be back to peep em.

much love, phyzical therapy

[Hi_D_Ho_Man]

where are the lyrics. Nice down south track. cant really comment too much on the mix but. Baller sounds alot cleaner the the other two

[jugalo180]

thanks. i didn't write anything to baller yet, i'm going to change baller up a little, due to the advice up above.