i stepped it up a little

[jugalo180]

i did a little better job than before at mixing this song. if anyone can find the time to critic it for me i would apreciate it. please remember that i'm still a beginner at this. it's all south. let me know if the rap has some potential, and what i should do different.

http://www.nowhereradio.com/loueazy/singles

[Abyyss]

Nice job. Sounds good. Some of the changes from verse to chorus aren't quite perfect but as far as I can hear, everything's fine.

Sounds good.

[jugalo180]

yo thanks for peeping it out. go into detail for me. let me know exactly what it is that needs improving. i appreciate your honest opinion. i would rather someone tell me what is wrong thus helping my developement, than to tell me it sounds good to not hurt my pride, but hendering my developement. it's all about tactics. when i get my sound good then i'll start asking people to critique the lyrics. holla back with any suggestions or direct comments on the songs material, so i can get back in the lab.

[Abyyss]

The only thing I can see wrong with it is maybe the vocals could be turned up a little on the verses. And the vocals don't seem to run smoothly from verse to chorus - same with the beat, I think it's because everything just jumps in - they don't quite sound right linking.

All I can say.

[jugalo180]

yeah, i was experimenting with the verses and hooks. i had the strings panned during the verses and up the middle during the hooks. i had the vocals up the middle during the verses and panned during the hooks. i think i exaggerated it too much. maybe if i was more subtle it would have sounded better. thanks for the feed back.

[lilman42459]

For the most part I like it. The vocals could be louder but they sound real clear. Got a nice dirty south sound to it.


lil

[jugalo180]

i'm taking baby steps now, but i'm noticing improvement on my work. i'll be back with something new soon. i appreciate the love.