an original "fire dance"

[myles loud]

hi everyone!!
have a listen, it's an instrumental...

www.mylesloud.com/firedance.mp3

thnx, myles

[Phyl]

Nice song!

The only problem I noticed was during the intro. It seemed like the synth pad was appearing and then disppearing in the right channel rather suddenly. If you were panning this sound back and forth between the channels on purpose, the panning seemed a little abrupt.

[theron]

Hello,

I thought the bass could definitly be pushed up and pump more. The percusion is light on the "umph" side as well. Almost and after thought......

Great chops!! Sounds like you had a blast ripping away...........


Peace,
Theron.

[myles loud]

hey everyone,
thnx for the reviews!!
hi phyl,
i'm glad you liked it
there are 2 different synth pads, one is a string patch in the left, and the other is an oohs patch in the right. i noticed that at the end of my mp3's i get a double ending on them when i try to edit them from wav files.
hi theron,
thnx for the direction, i can always use it. i did have a blast on the guitars, and bass, ect. the leads are first take, i plan to go back and perfect them, but i keep getting into other projects and writting more songs. i've started playing live congas now on my most recent cuts, but the ones i'm posting are not the live congas.

i should state that i'm looking at these for thier marketabilty, and i would perfect the production before putting them to c.d.
i'm posting another cut called i dream of loving you, i'll list it here as well:

www.mylesloud.com/idreamoflovingyou.mp3

see how you like this one! thnx again, myles loud