ill track need critics

[israw]

called severe punishment
im the second mc on here
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[anti alias]

AS FAR AS THE BEAT, IM NOT REALLY FEELING IT. ITS TOO SLOW....... AS FAR AS THE EMCEES, LYRICALLY ITS PRETTY GOOD, BUT NONE OF YOU REALLY HAVE MICROPHONE CADENCE. ITS LIKE YOU YOU ALL STRUGGLE TO STAY ON BEAT AS IF YOU ARE MIMICKING SOMEONE'S STYLE AS FAR AS ROLLIN WIT THE BEAT. I DUNNO, PRACTICE YOUR STYLE AND MIC CADENCE AND YOU'LL COME OFF DOPE. AND I COULD TELL YOUR USING A CHEAP DYNAMIC MIC. IT SEEMED LIKE YOU GUYS WERE NOT FLOING AS LOUD AS YOU SHOULD, ALMOST MONOTONE. BRING MANY TONES TO THE MICROPHONE AND GET A BETTER MICROPHONE.

[israw]

any more replies?

[Billabong]

ca·dence
n. pl. ca·denc·es

Balanced, rhythmic flow, as of poetry or oratory.
The measure or beat of movement, as in dancing or marching.

1. A falling inflection of the voice, as at the end of a sentence.

2. General inflection or modulation of the voice.

3. Music. A progression of chords moving to a harmonic close, point of rest, or sense of resolution.


You seem to lack 'flow'...it sounds like you are forcing the words out.
The beat isn't bad, but I would maybe fatten up the sound of the organ/dulcimer/gong-thing.

Later,
Billabong