When They Come Around My Block (Clips)

[rapper2001]

http://us.f1.yahoofs.com/users/eedf0...VLo98AQ8deJ2.E


http://us.f1.yahoofs.com/users/eedf0...VLo98AgVLnScgl


Excuse the language.

[theron]

First of all, you have plenty of pounding, pulsing, shake grandma out of mumu bass on that little snippet for sure! When the track started playing, my woulfer(sp?) threw a loaded ashtray all over me!! Damn thing pumps!

Second of all, how am I suppose to listen and potentially comment on your tune when all I get is 24 secs of a (I'm guessing here) refrain? Lay the whole thing out.
Not big on the genre but, the snippet was tasty.

Theron.

I gotta go clean my shirt (or stop smoking).

[mixmkr]

Originally posted by rapper2001

Excuse the language.

you're excused. what kinda comments are you looking for?

[rapper2001]

Thx for listenin' "Theron".

I just posted those snippets so i can see how you like the song so far. But i still got' alot of stuff to add on the song like background vocals and all dat. I havent finished the song yet either. I might cut the monster voice out and put another part in there. I'll probably eq the beat a little also.

I should be finish with this song in a couple weeks and when i get finish double checkin' it then i'll post the full thing here.

P.S. Sorry about the ashtray story. lol....but i luv it when i use beats with alot of bass.

[rapper2001]

Originally posted by mixmkr


you're excused. what kinda comments are you looking for?

Any.

[coffeeandtv]

you should add something to the chorus, not necessarily extra lyrics but maybe a little sample of stuff scratched in at the end........overall i thought it was pretty good snippets even though im not that big on "gangsta rap" =)

[CyanJaguar]

Pretty good beat. Its a little ways of from being well mixed but just a tad bit.

THe vocal is buried by the bass. I like the bass but I cant even hear the kick for it. I think the vocal delivery needs more energy and visualisation.

Funk on!