Check out this new beat.. Hows the mixing? are ya feelin it?

[Mr. SoL]

http://artists.mp3s.com/artist_song/2180/2180793.html

There's the link, thanks for taking the time to check it out. No samples used of course. How's my mixing? Us33 gave me a few pointers, let me know if my mix is improved. Emcees: Can you hear your vocals sliding smoothly into this one? I hope so, because it's royalty free as of now, until someone buys it!

[Blue Bear Sound]

The back beat seems weak to me -- needs more punchiness, depth, and oooomph........

I like your ambient sounds though.... work on better drum sounds............

Good effort -- just boom it a bit more!!

Bruce

[Chriss]

damn that synth sucked.. that's the worst thing i've heard coming from you yet mr sol.. if i were you i'd simply drop it and move on..
imo you make some pretty tight tracks, even though i've allways hated hip hop, but this is the stuff that would actually make me smash my radio to bits...

[Mr. SoL]

lolololol

thanks for the feeds anyway guys

[crosstudio]

i don't think it's a throw away, but the choice in synth for the melody will grate on a listener after a couple of listens. the beat is more than nice, and the melody has a nice swing that would make it easy to hook and then drop for the verses. if the vocal pattern of the verses follows the cadence of the melody you've got a hit.

the synth doth suck, but no more than the synths used on these hits:

where would i be without you --- ja rule

thank you --- lil bow wow