1st song on my cd that im currently trying to write write & record

[WEBCYAN]

lyrics critique.

what do you all think. Keep in mind these are only the lyrics and you cant actually hear the melody of it.
I tried to make the lyrics very meaningfull but still keeping it a bit obscure. Try to guess what Im getting at.
btw, I only have the 1st verse and chorus done, so...

((Verse))

Proclaim it from the alter,
Time to raise up your arms.
Warning to the masses,
Seventh week alarm.

You shouldn't be at rest,
All three watching you now.

Hand in your tithing for your crown,
It's the only way you'll get out.

((Chorus))

Let the mindset settle in,
That what they offer no one can.
Shed your blood before the lamb.
Contribute to his master plan.