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[Herm]

http://mysite.verizon.net/resugtpa/s.../chris.mp3.mp3

Guys I just did some recording yesterday of some buddies of mine and was wondering if you would give this a listen. I know after bringing the two track up stairs to lthe computer the vocals are pretty high so that will have to be fixed.
I think my ears are fried from yesterday so any help would be great.

I probably should wait a few days before I try to do anything but I was bored and needed something to do.

Anyway this was the 38 and m312 mixer

Thanks

[Rickson Gracie]

the vocals sound really good. are you using compression? what kind of mic?

[Herm]

Thanks Yea there is some compresion from a alesis 3630 and the mic is a at4040 audiotechnica.

[Dr ZEE]

This passes laptop's built-in beep-beep-speakers pretty well , which is a tough test ,
I'm not in the position to play it through any good amp/speakers right now.

[SteveM]

All I think it needs is a little more definition/sheen in the high end and as mentioned, the vocals could come down a little. Otherwise it's a very well recorded, put together..etc.

BTW I'm listening through cheap computer speakers so YMMV.