January's challenge "Seven Tears Ago" Frankie's contribution

[Frankie Rage]

Well, I have got something but nothing like I wanted it to be ...but here it is anyway... had to rush this as time ran away with itself... if I don't upload it now, I'll miss the 31st for sure... let me warn you, it's a rough demo only!

Seven Tears Ago C. 2009

Took your picture off my wall
it doesn’t fit there anymore
although your smile is still the same
it’s not for me, and now the frame
is lying broken on the floor

I smashed a glass and cut my hand
and while I’m trying to deal with that
another bill falls on the mat
reminding me it’s all that’s left
and that you're never coming home

Now I close my eyes and face again
the truth it's hard to take but plain
you told me I was a fool in love
dancing all around you
seven tears ago

Our love died in this old house
still born no breath of you survives
you left me in the night
with no reason and no fight
said, it's all that we deserve

Baby clothes still on the line
guess you thought they wouldn't dry in time
and your jeans bluer than the sky
but I don't criticise
it was all my love was worth

So I close my eyes and face again
your truth it's hard to take but plain
you told me I was a fool in love
dancing all around me
seven tears ago,
seven tears ago…

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[icystorm]

Good job, Frankie! Comments after the 31st...

Joseph