Take Me

[SuaveRecords]

this is just the rough idea. the second vers will be sung by a girl and the chourus will have female harmony. also, the vocal section after the bridge will be one male and one female voice. its a call and response kinda thing. ne way, this is my rough idea for it. id like input on what els should be there to fill it out, if something needs to change and if so what. thanks alot guys

http://www.reverbnation.com/chrisreid

[SuaveRecords]

well its pretty 50/50. the song is written. i just need help on what parts should go where in the mix and what should be the prominent thing going on. but ok, thanks lol

If any one has any tips on that aspect please feel free to let me know. thanks

[SuaveRecords]

oh and if your going to delete my posts id prefer if you just sent me a message about it instead of posting it publicly haha thanks

[Chili]

Originally Posted by SuaveRecords

oh and if your going to delete my posts id prefer if you just sent me a message about it instead of posting it publicly haha thanks

Sorry about that, I wasn't sure if you read your pm's. I'll delete my post now.

[Chili]

Okay back to the subject at hand. Dude, this song needs nothing, it works as it is.

If I were to make any suggestions.... The guitar strumming with the high note held throughout gives the sense of a building tension that may not be resolved. I'd like to hear more of that climax that the song seems to be leading towards. I think adding drums towards the end will help.

I got lost with which part was suppose to be female or male, and where the call and response part was. Maybe posting the lyrics will help.

Cheers,