A song called "we're getting high

[SongJohn]

My bassist and I wrote this. I'm playing all instruments except for bass, which is my friend Jack.
Drums and bass are taped to cassette, and then the overdubs are done on the PC for ease..it's just a rough demo...what are your opinions on the writings? Thank you!

Here's the .mp3 link:

(id post the link but I get this:You are only allowed to post URLs to other sites after you have made 5 posts or more. Sorry folks.

Here are the words...

trying to make a living
but no one is giving
ordinary people the time
or even just a piece of their mind

television users
and local drug abusers
weaved into a fabric of crime
bring on the nation's decline

and we must go back to a bygone day
we've got to find out where we lost our way

want to hear the others singing
why oh why
cant believe what you'll be seeing
flying by
I don't know what makes you happy
wanting more no end in sight
I don't think that making money
is all there should be to life

wanna make some real good money?!
Try a tie
and if you find it's what you're really needing
find the light!

fly high we're getting high
we're flying to the sky
fly high we're getting high
we're going out of time

flying to the galaxies
for a groovier change of hand
and since we don't play today
a trip is all you needed to stay

[WhiteStrat]

Maybe you could type out the link with spaces and the word dot instead of actual dots so we could check it out.

[SongJohn]

Thanks white strat...but I finally have the link now!

Here's the .mp3 link. Sorry about the wasting of time!


http://www.garageband.com/mp3/Acid_T...0LdsaSgYVaza2o

[WhiteStrat]

Cool, I'll try to check it out and post again today...