New rough demo "I'm a ghost to you" please give advice...

[14yearoldkid]

Hey! I just added a new song, Please if you have some time, give a kid some advice =]

Its a rough demo of a song called "I'm a ghost to you", enjoy, hopefully =]

www.myspace.com/bxany

[Rokket]

The acoustic in the left channel sounds boxy and direct inserted. Have you tried to mic it? It also sounds like you eq'd all the lows out of it.

Performance-wise, this ain't my cup of tea, but the singing sounds genuine and heartfelt. It's just that acoustic guitar that is ruining it for me.

Put a little more make up gain in the compression on your vocal. At times the guitar washes it out and I can't make out anything you are singing.

[14yearoldkid]

hey rokket! thank you for taking the time to listen to it... I will definitely go and try to fix it... What i found was the i mixed it on speakers... then when i went to listen to it on a lower quality speaker system like a laptop, i couldnt hear the vocals as well as i did when i mixed it! Im learning! hehe thank you again