Some thoughts on my new song

[snellular5]

I wrote this tonight and quickly got some tracks down just for rough. Tell me what you think and if you have any suggestions I'd love to hear them.
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6860431
I was thinkin for drums just a simple ride and snare combo with brushes?
Thanks alot everyone
Matt

[Seafroggys]

your link is leading me to soundclick's homepage.

[snellular5]

O darn I think its cause they said something like they have 24 hours after I post my song until it becomes viewable to the public. Sorry for this everyone.

[Acousticles]

It's workin now and soundin nice man. Your voice reminds of Neil Young.

The only thing I could recommend at this point is that at some points the bass hits a bit hard. And yea, ride and snare would go nicely.

[snellular5]

Thanks alot! I definately agree that at some points the bass comes through way to hard. I want the bass to sit at a normal level but just those slides that have the fret noise coming through to cut through alot.

[bozmillar]

is that an acoustic bass with a pickup?

[snellular5]

its an electric bass but im running it really wierdly through a line 6 guitar pod