this migth be worst!!!!

[Royleking]

this is my first post...

I'm doing some music since a long time ago in the darkness of my basement, and i think is time to show some bad music to the world.
If is bad sorry, if is no bad thanks for the comments.

guitars, all me
bass, me
drum, some loop that i found.

thanks for listen.

cid-8ba873693040d3b3.skydrive.live.com/self.aspx/Musica%20de%20Roger/BUENOS%20AIRES.mp3

[MadAudio]

Can't hear it at all. Maybe a link would help.

[RAMI]

My freezer needs cleaning. The ice on the sides is closing in and it's getting smaller and smaller.

[Riffmaster]

The mix is a little squirelly. But overall I'd say I have no idea what you're talking about.

[ido1957]

Ok - I bit and here is the link for everyone else....it's a big MP3 (11MB)

http://cid-8ba873693040d3b3.skydrive...OS%20AIRES.mp3

Roger - It sounds pretty good. Kind of a long jam at 6:27. The balance and mix are pretty good. I like the reverb on the lead guitar. I would have liked the same reverb on the intro classical guitar and the bridge guitar section to keep it consistent. The intro classical guitar sounds slightly out of tune. The distorted lead guitar is too loud in the mix - take the volume down a bit there. Other than that the mix sounded pretty good....

[Royleking]

thanks for the help and the comments ido1957.

[Supercreep]

LOL, Welcome to HR.

Almost all the elements of a song are present. Now you just need some sort of complimentary change of direction...... Because it feels waaaaaaaay too long.

It's weird when one instrument has a lot of verb another doesn't have.

This one has a little ways to go.

However, this is not by any long stretch of the imagination the worst music I've heard. You'll have to work much harder if you want that crown.



Keep it coming.

[rayc]

Sorry mate - I don't download files that big unless I know what I'm getting. Get a soundclick account (it's free) and use their streamer.
Apart from that I got a laugh from baseman (I thought you meant bass man not basement) and welcome to the online home of this worrying addiction.

[Royleking]

sorry for the baseman part, but when you speak 4 languages you are not only mixing music, sometimes you mix words.

[rayc]

mate, it gave me a laugh - I knew where you were heading.
I'm barely able to manage English so my hat's off to you.
Now, get the soundclick thing going so i can listen to your music.

[Royleking]

[QUOTE=Royleking;2959281]this is my first post...

I'm doing some music since a long time ago in the darkness of my basement, and i think is time to show some bad music to the world.
If is bad sorry, if is no bad thanks for the comments.

guitars, all me
bass, me
drum, some loop that i found.

thanks for listen.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6723503

[suprstar]

You'll have to work much harder if you want that crown.

Yeah, that title is MINE thankyouverymuch! I think it sounds ok, I agree the lead guitar is too loud. That's my only real critique on the production.

Songwise - There's a weird little pause at 3:32 that made me think 'what the hell??', Everything just stopped for 1/2 a beat, I thought it sounded really odd.. I was kinda zoning on the peaceful relaxing acoustic part, that pause really distracted me. There was no fade out, no buildup, no nothing. Just stop, then start up again as abruptly as it stopped. I didnt know if it was intentional, or if you were starting over, or what.

[rayc]

The bass tone is a really good proggy type and is an interesting counter to the mellowness of the acoustic.
The acoustic sound nice.
The loop seems to have a prob in the h/hats.
The electric - with the repeat/echo bits it might work if you panned the repeat/echo a bit to the side. As it sits I was expecting to hear the phrase replayed but it came as distant & quiet and took me a moment to clue into it being what it was. the electric could be pulled back a bit to give the acoustic more space.
Nice subtle playing.