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[Fieva]

i would say boost your vocals just a little to make them stand out more.

Also, what kind of delay are you using on your vocals because it's throwin me off a lil bit? It's either that or double take verses following too far behind each other.

As for the rest, I like it. Got some good east coast flavor and you don't see enough of that these days.

[ace3]

Originally Posted by Fieva

i would say boost your vocals just a little to make them stand out more.

Also, what kind of delay are you using on your vocals because it's throwin me off a lil bit? It's either that or double take verses following too far behind each other.

As for the rest, I like it. Got some good east coast flavor and you don't see enough of that these days.

thanks fam but yea those are just doubles (meant to be echoes on the vocals) ill try to make them sound a lil in sync on the next couple tracks I try. thanks for th e feed!

[Fieva]

That's what I thought but I knew the other could have been a possibility.

Yeah just bring them closer together and they will work better.

[gullyjewelz]

DAM YO - REAL NICE "FLASH" AT THE TOP! HOW U DO DAT? (LOL)
--u sound a lil like young berg - is that a effect on your voice or your natural? - if its an effect - I WOULDNT RECOMMEND IT [BUT thats cuz i cant stand young berg]
-- --u def. got that swagga poppin off !!
rathr hear u ride on an original **although a couple of them songs aint as familiar to me as others so are any of those originals?**
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(dont get me wrong, i like the industry jackin n do it myself -

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