New Beat Called New York City

[DesertEase]

Did this joint today fellas let me know wut you guys think about this joint


lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=6637051&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=6637051&q=hi

[DesertEase]

No one got any ideas or comments for this beat?

[Fieva]

I will get to this one D.E. trust me on that....just gotta finish up this paper for school.

[Fieva]

Aiight, now that I got that paper out the way, I listened to your track. I like the flow and where it's going.

I would change two very small things. First in your verse section, the last two notes of that piano melody seem just a bit off IMO. Make it just a little trickier and it could fix that.

Second, the sample could have been flipped a little better once again IMO (but it could probably work with the right dude blessin' the beat). I would repeat the "I don't know why I love" part like 3 times and then throw the New York City part right after it. I hardly ever sample though so if anyone else has ideas, that'd be cool too.

Fiev.

[DesertEase]

i was actually thinkin bout takin the whole vocal section of the beat out i don't like the transition from that part to the verse but it's all i could come up with the other day so i'mma get back at it soon. if i do take it out i might flash some vocals throughout the verse at certain points idk....
thanks for your input fiev i preciate it.

[ammarg89]

Drums are sik, but not feelin the piano part, keep at it bro, maybe throw osme violins in there?!

[DesertEase]

idk margg i am really feelin them pianos, i'mma switch it up a bit and see if i can make it better, it's sloppy right now i only put about 20 minutes into it so far.

[ammarg89]

Cool, pianos usually sound good with violas, violins, strings, so try adding those as well,

PS hit my post!

[gullyjewelz]

really feelin the drum track
pianos are cool to me
i would like to hear some kind of effect on the hook - chop/screw (pitch shift) OR autotune - BUT i am always "into" the latest production tricks . . . so thats y i say it
i like the track - wish it said "Richmond city" - lol or . . . "down south city" - lol regionalism at its best!