It's been a long time for me fam

[DesertEase]

I don't remember the last time i posted a beat on here for ya'll to critique so i thought i would put up this joint and see ya'lls thoughts.

lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=6614845&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=6614845&q=hi

[Fieva]

I would drop the level on that harpsichord and the choir vocals a little bit...too overpowering

The intro guitar melody was solid. The verse ones weren't hitting me as much....I would have stuck with the intros and looped them all the way through. Should fit with the other melodies.

[Noddy301]

FEELING IT!!!
just dont like the choir

[Lab24Seven]

Ayo, that beat is tight. I could hear Mobb Deep tearing that ish up. Nice work.

[antym2006]

man i like the entire beat no lie. its on point if anything id raise the guitar a little and lower the choir a bit but nicee and when the guitar solos it gives it a little character haha..its dope

[killianbeats]

Yeh Ease this is dope. I agree about the chior though. Maybe lower the volume on it just a little. Otherwise great track.

[Noddy301]

V I called you the other day and you didnt pick up!
*punk*
lol

[gullyjewelz]

oh ouch shit - that is some HOT phuckin bangin azz dammm goood shit my dude - im ready to git it crunk off that - im high off that track!!! no lie!

[DesertEase]

thanx for the feedback my dudes i'mma adjust some levels real quick and then gully the track is yours if u want it

[gullyjewelz]

oh hell yea - im on vaction this week too - i might be able to get the thing written nad recorded in between rum shots and beach naps!

[DesertEase]

aight i took some advice and i got rid of the choir completely, i also changed the kicks and snare and hats. remolded the drum track recreated the bass added some strings and put a nasty lil breakdown for the hook. peep it once more and let me know if the changes were good or bad aight?

oh and gully hopefully you like this version better too i'mma send the beat to you once i see which version u feelin more





lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=6614845&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=6614845&q=hi

[Fieva]

I like that...its sick, but I would raise those strings or layer them with higher pitched ones to throw some variety into that track....

I LOVE where the direction is going with this one fam. Noddin' my head throughout the whole thing homie.

Fiev.

[DesertEase]

Thanx Fiev i preciate it fam

[gullyjewelz]

gotta git a copy of this so i can vibe to it while i drive - the verses are . . . bubblin now!

[DesertEase]

aight gully i sent the track out

[gullyjewelz]

got it. its in da whip first thin in the AM - or later tonight if i go out ridin!!!

[gullyjewelz]

yo - D. whats your email address . . . i cant find it in my gmail account . .

[DesertEase]

yea gully i got the track it sounds good i like where u went with that. i noticed a few spots where the levels were off but it's fixable. dope track it's goin in the whip lol. i got a lot more beats i been workin on so i'm gonna post up some and see wuts good if u want some more

[gullyjewelz]

thats whats up!