Opinion

[Jayme]

Ok, I've been recording these tracks in my bedroom so I was just wondering if anyone would like to give their opinion on the lyrics and the construction of these songs?
Rip them to pieces if needs be!

Here is the link to my profile:


http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm...ndID=343019882


Thanks

[ido1957]

I listened to Far from Home, Wompychew.

Excellent Jayme.... lyrics and music top notch.

[Jayme]

Thanks!!! It's nice to hear what people think.

[Jayme]

Anyone else?

[up-fiddler]

I listened to Wompychew and Cats and Rats. Both pieces are nicely done.

Wompychew has a nice universal pop feel to it and the vox take is awesome. It is produced well for that genre and should turn some heads. (and ears!)

As a musician, I prefer Cats and Rats. It shows off your skill at the keyboard and the song structure is far more intricate. Great work with the left hand to keep the song moving and breathing.