New Song Up 4 Feedback Plz Assist

[gullyjewelz]

song title: standin at the fork

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6066958

feedback please

[ammarg89]

it was ok, some instruemnst might have to be tweaked a bit like the kick and snare, but the melody was dope ass hell, sounds good keep doin ya thang.

[gullyjewelz]

damm thats a first - the melody was good? sheit!!! thats definitely a plus for me! i was thinkin that the drum patter was better than the melody . . . cwhatiknow

[ammarg89]

drum pattern was good, im just sayinga ctual drum selection, the note chosing was good justc hange up teh instruments to something more cool sounding, try sitars instead of that guitar.

[gullyjewelz]

Ahite Im A Do That! Bet!

[dacalion]

No doubt, tighten up those drums, quantize them. Also, change the velocity on each of your snare hits, that will give them a more "real drum" feel. The melody was dope maybe add a touch of reverb to smoothe it out and blend a little more, just a touch.

Overall, nice beat...keep up the good work!

dac

[gullyjewelz]

Thanks!!! I Gotta Work On The Velocity . . . Gotta Go Do Some Readin . . . Lol

[dacalion]

Thats whats up, I posted up a couple of beats that I kinda threw on the back burner (for now anyway) just so you can get a feel of what I'm talking about, the snare hits in "Flipped 1" are all at different velocities which really helps them sound closer to being real rather than a drum machine...here's my soundclick link...check the drums on Flipped 1 first, they almost sound sampled.


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...?bandID=751257

dac

[gullyjewelz]

ok thats whats up . . . i really like the music u used on it - - i can hear the "difference" in the snares . . . now i gotta find "velocity" as an effect on the triton . .

[dacalion]

Let us know what you come up with, I'm 99% sure that you can adjust the velocity on a Triton.

dac

[suringe]

loved the melodies on this,,,the drums need to be tightend but overall,,,could be a killer with the right flow,,,had my head nodding my nig,,
the main melody should go through the whole song,,insetd of all the change ups,,,still good shit tho

[gullyjewelz]

thanks im gon be workin on it again, probably not till new years eve . . . lol wit my school and two jobs and other collaboz and tryin to start up a new "band" . . . im trippin!!!

but im gon gitRdone!

[liv_rong]

is the track still there???

i tried to listen to it but nothing came up, the page was loading forever

[gullyjewelz]

its still there - i will check on it - but its there i havent taken it down

[Re-Lapse]

Gully Gully Gully, muh boy. I aint got much to say because they pinned it all right.

You know what you gotta do homie, keep it comin' I'm diggin it.

I been busy as heeellll. Workin' on a website for my production, as well going to college from 7am til 5pm monday-friday, and workin' on websites for different companies, I'm redoing http://www.youthdynamics.org website as we speak!...

Maaayne it's busy.

nevertheless, you be busy and still be poppin', that's how you do it man.

I check back in later to hear some more from you I'm sure of it.

--Re-Lapse

(http://www.strictproductions.com) In the works. It's HORRID right now.

[bknot1]

Gully need a status report on the Where U at Collab...let me know...

[gullyjewelz]

got the verse writen - thought i was gon git it done this weekend - but a tree - yea -a frikkin tree - fell on my house!!!
should be able to resume normal by Saturday - i hope to be in the studio - as long as teh last crew comes in tomorrow to finish up - i should be straight!!
will let you know though

[bknot1]

Damn..sorry bout the house..hope it isn't to much damage... just let me know if you run into any problems... stay up..