just need some feed back please

[BK MANNY]

hi Im new here and I just would like some feed back on my music..
I only use a program called REASON for all my work together with
a small 49 key midi controler..I soon hope to buy an MPC some day and redo all my tracks
when I have all the right equipment...
I just need to know where I am lacking in my production..they are just intrumentals
all I have is 5 tracks at http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/198/brooklyn_manny.html

also I like to know who els uses REASON to produce hip/hop instrumentals or just music in general.
all I use is sound forge to atleast try to make it sound the way it should...

thanks in advance for your help and advice

[battle beatz]

yo Manny...

THE SAD VIOLINS: nice samples in there... the symphonic stuff is good and you switch it up a lot. you definately need an emcee on this track. I also like how the drum patterns switch up in the midde...

TIGHT SPOT: was that a drive-by!?! nice bumpin bass line - cool weather effects, one of the samples sounds a little out of place (too keyboard-like), once again, good variation of sequences and nice production technique... good shit.

BATTLE BEAT VOL 1: well, you took my name, but I like the uptempo drum track. The bass could use a little more filtering and EQing, but the vibe of the track is good. I would skratch to this track for a LONG TIME if it was looped...

Hit me back-

*Battle Beatz*
http://www.mp3.com/battle

[peritus]

Originally Posted by BK MANNY

I only use a program called REASON for all my work together with
a small 49 key midi controler..I soon hope to buy an MPC some day and redo all my tracks
when I have all the right equipment...

ROFL...

I love these old threads...

[jugalo180]

Originally Posted by BK MANNY

hi Im new here and I just would like some feed back on my music..
I only use a program called REASON for all my work together with
a small 49 key midi controler..I soon hope to buy an MPC some day and redo all my tracks
when I have all the right equipment...
I just need to know where I am lacking in my production..they are just intrumentals
all I have is 5 tracks at http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/198/brooklyn_manny.html

also I like to know who els uses REASON to produce hip/hop instrumentals or just music in general.
all I use is sound forge to atleast try to make it sound the way it should...

thanks in advance for your help and advice

yeah, some people are doing the exact opposite. I wonder what that guy thinks of Reason today, was that you peritus?

[peritus]

Nah... Not me... I've been using reason for a long time... I just wish I would have peeped the MPC back in the day... I didn't know it was so revered or even that it existed... AKA... I started on my own without guidance... lol..