New Song... Please Critique!

[jamesduysen]

Hey guys,

For those of you commented on my last mix (alright http://homerecording.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=242522), this is another song from my bands cd.
Its called your eyes in the sky.

Please take a listen!:

http://atlasiowa.com/yeitsnewb1mp3.mp3

Thanks Alot!

-jD

[Monkey Allen]

A littler bit Blink182 sounding. Sounds like a pretty good recording. Sounds like theres a nut loose on the hihat.

Pretty sweet. Not my kinda scene, but well done

[jamesduysen]

Thanks. I still have a lot of mixing to do...Thanks for the response.

-jD

[rayc]

Captured well but needs some brightness.

[Jouni]

Yep, can't say I remember listening the previous song, but this ain't bad.
I'd get an audible bass in there, and definetly DO something for the hi-hat, if still possible. It kinda steals the attention at start.
But oh yes, the teens will be all over you guys!!