What the hell is this?

[Grey Angel]

. . . http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=5221341


... I don't know, but it was really fun to make

Also, I'm asking for those with experienced ears to let me know if there are any blatant problems with the mixing. Thanks.

[travelin travis]

i'm assuming the stuttering was intentional? of course it was.

only a couple of tracks there, the drums could be much bigger to take up the space and maybe a double guitar track. i think there's a bass in there? is there? if there is, get that sucker up.

it's a death gallop.

[Grey Angel]

Oooh, I thought maybe the bass was too prominent, actually... but good, then. I shall definitely tinker with it. Thanks for the listen

[Dogman]

Sorta has a surf metal vibe....

Fill her up, as Travis says. Make the tracks a bit fuller to make this thing sound big. Drums could take up alot more space.

Fun tune though....

[chrisharris]

short and sweet...it's a cool riff.

Yeah, the bass could use some definition...

rawk

[XLR]

Good sound. I'd like more attack and low end pulse in the gtr tone.

Seeing your pic that the original song link goes to, have to say... don't bend your wrist when throwing a punch. And get that thumb out of the way so it doesn't break on impact.

[travelin travis]

good advice tim.

[metalhead28]

It's a cool riff. It brings to mind some black metal band but I can't think of who right now.

[scrubs]

Well, that was quick, but cool. I tend to agree with the other comments. If you could make the guitar a little crunchier, I think it would kick significantly more ass.

[Grey Angel]

Originally Posted by Timothy Lawler

Good sound. I'd like more attack and low end pulse in the gtr tone.

Seeing your pic that the original song link goes to, have to say... don't bend your wrist when throwing a punch. And get that thumb out of the way so it doesn't break on impact.

Heh, thanks for the advice. Same for everyone else; I'll be working on it.

[Greg_L]

Ditto to what everyone else said. Just make it BIGGER. Big guitars, big drums, big everything. Sounds cool. Good job.

[Freudian Slip]

I vote surf metal
Pretty cool!
Ditto on what every one else said. I'd start with the drums.


F.S.

[Grey Angel]

Ok, I'm working on the above track, but there's a new one...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=5253204


I'm gonna be turning this into a full song eventually, but right now I just want to know what you guys think of the idea.

[true-eurt]

Cool Angel!! I love where you are going with it!!

Love your intro and the build up with different instruments. Is it a keyboard or the guit through an effects box?

Like the tone and distortion on your axe.

I can't wait to hear the full version of it.

True

[true-eurt]

It is some good stuff Angel...that is what it is.

19 yrs old....I can't wait to hear you in about 5 yrs, if you keep on with it!

True