Any fam care to hop on this beat with me?

[Noddy301]

Im kind of aiming for the laid back/thug type feel, but whosoever hops on may change whatever they want...lemme know if ur down.......ps its currently very rough

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=5146515&q=hi

[BillyBo]

nice beat man.

[gullyjewelz]

Yo - Im Feelin That!! Can I Git A Lil Spacce For Sweet 16

[Noddy301]

Originally Posted by gullyjewelz

Yo - Im Feelin That!! Can I Git A Lil Spacce For Sweet 16

Yeah I got you G Jewelz...once i get home; but Im still open to offers for a collaboration

[Trumpspade]

Yo bro

In my opinion, you are slowly becoming one of the best beatmakers on this site. Your arrangements and musical concepts (Clock ticking to compliment name of beat) are on point! You do that alot. When you name your beat, you'll find that concept within the beat.....

[Fieva]

Shit I'm impressed Nods. Throw me in on 16 and probably the hook too. GJ you down to do this?

Fiev

[Venom]

Ooh shit noddy!
I Like that a lot... Tempts me to go home and top it.

haha sike nah thats sweet keep it up.

[vmock]

yo thats nice man, i see exactly where you going with the laid back/thug thing

[gullyjewelz]

yo fiev - lets get r done!!!

[Fieva]

Actually I wrote a verse last week that fits this beat well. I'll PM u with em

[DesertEase]

noddy if i hop on this beat wit u then the other guys verses prolly ain't gonna fit to it cuz i'mma switch it up cuz it sounds too plain to me

[Fyre]

ill get on this too fuck it.....

[DesertEase]

just send me the zip file so i can do my thang

[Noddy301]

Just let me know how you guys want it arranged and I'll get it done.....D Ease Im about to send it

[Noddy301]

Ok so heres the deal fam I arranged the beat in to song format. It comes off the bat wit a part for a hook then room for a 16, hook, one more 16, hook, room for 18 or 20, and then 2 hooks to end it off.....but heres the catch I have 2 versions of it...I need to know which one yall are feeling the most so I can send it out to you guys...I envisioned Gully, Fiev, and Fyre on it thats why its so long

KILL TIME
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=5146515&q=hi

KILL TIME *PITCH DOWN*
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=5152259&q=hi

[Trumpspade]

Originally Posted by Noddy301

Just let me know how you guys want it arranged and I'll get it done.....D Ease Im about to send it

I think you should leave it the way it is. I like the arrangements you did to better fit the format. And you may go back and change more things when you get the verses and hook laid down. But as far as the instr., I would leave it the way it is. You don't want to clutter the song, and I think the groove is perfect! (Of course this is only my opinion!)

[Noddy301]

Thanx Trump!

[DesertEase]

aight then we can work on some other stuff if you don't wanna send this one playa

[Noddy301]

naa its not like that I thought I sent it D

[Fyre]

it dont matta what beat we use to me... um just send me the joint when we at least have a hook so i can do my verse..... and whats the line up? whos first second and third

[Fieva]

I like the original better. Screwing the beat takes a lot of the important elements out of it (making it harder to hear) like the clock ticking.

I wrote a verse spoken faster that fits to this beat perfectly (like Bone). Funny thing is I wrote the verse two weeks ago (a while before Noddy even did the beat). I just changed the last bar of it to fit the beat....if you wanna see it here it is.


Post up at the corner - I got a lil' money but I ain't got a job or nothin'
And the real of the situation is - I'm a hustla - muthafucka
Make money by any means necessary - sometimes it's scary
They gonna laugh at you Carrie - that's why they be dead an' buried
In a cemetery - the lesson to learn - don't fuck with the hustle
I came up quick when you struggle - so ya'll know I done hired some muscle
To protect me an' my assets - quick to bust automatics
Any static - an' bullets'll probably enter that ass like faggots
It could be drastic - but I'm all about my business - keep gettin' that paper
I'll be shootin' them dice in the alley or I'm goin' to pull off a caper
On some haters - give a fuck about 'em - I'll give 'em a reason to hate me
Stealin' shit outta they houses - sell all the product - money I'm makin
Go in small amounts to the bank accounts - money launderin' schemes
Will fulfill all my hopes an' dreams - just for doin' these scandalous deeds
Indeed - I'm knowin' bad karma be comin' right back to get me
Only got one shot to make it - better hurry though - time is tickin'

[Noddy301]

Wow! I'm not an emcee but I know heat when I "see" it...I wonder how you would come about putting a complimentary hook together

[Fieva]

Originally Posted by Noddy301

Wow! I'm not an emcee but I know heat when I "see" it...I wonder how you would come about putting a complimentary hook together

Usually takes a LOT longer for me to form the hook than the whole verse because I think the hook has to be the catchiest part of the whole track and it has to stand out separately from the verses.

[DesertEase]

thats funny cuz i can write hooks but i can't write ryhmes haha but for real tho this track is fine like it is so we can work on another track noddy

[Noddy301]

Hit me up with something D Ease