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Here's another Song...
Time Moves On
Lyrics written by Henry Duthler Look how we’ve changed Throughout these years So Many memories So many tears And all of these feelings We’re unable to hide These are our reasons To say our goodbyes Chorus: And Time Moves on And quickly slips away Like the dark of night into dawn And another seasons begun And our times been washed away Fading embers in a storm Look at us now It’s been a year The worst is behind us The way is so clear We’ve chosen our paths Not knowing what we’d find And the sun will rise again In it’s own time (Chorus) Bridge: We change like the seasons Against our will Never knowing the reasons Hoping someday we will For every twist of fate A leap of faith is made And for every road we’ve taken Lies a path we’ve strayed Copyright Henry Duthler 2007 Let me know what you think... |
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Very nice. You might want to look at the chorus. Quite a profusion of metaphors in there.
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The Chorus
Yeah, it might be better if it were simpler...with less metaphors...But I really like the line, "Fading Embers In A Storm"
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You know, I just read your lyrics to "The Eternal Fire".
That song and this seem to be alternate workings of the same idea. Or am I wrong? |
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