True-ly

[true-eurt]

True-ly

Love for love
Heart for heart
Soul for soul
Friend for friend

With a heart to listen
A soul to share
Eyes to witness
We made it there

You give me enough...to hold onto
Something to get me through....until
These shadows...fade away

True-ly....I hear the moonrise
I feel the fire
True-ly....I see the rainbow
I taste the sun

With a friend to hold
A word to save
A love to protect
When we're not brave

You give me enough...to hold onto
Something to get me through....until
These shadows...fade away

True-ly....I hear the moonrise
I feel the fire
True-ly....I see the rainbow
I taste the sun

You give me enough...to hold onto
Something to get me through....until
These shadows...fade away
You give me enough to hold onto
Something to get me through....until
These shadows...fade away
True-ly....True-ly.....True-ly


True 2007

[32-20-Blues]

Hey, nice job True.

What does it for me is the "hearing the moon rise [...] tasting the sun", because the descriptions aren't logical, yet they make sense in a 'heightened awareness' kind of way. It's almost like an 'epiphany poem' - when things don't necessarily make sense (in a good way) because of the intensity of what is being experienced.

Anyway, it's good.

[ido1957]

True-ly these are great lyrics.....they express some excellent emotion and sound like they are coming straight from the heart - the best place for lyrics to come from....

Pattern-wise - there are two verses before the first chorus, but only one verse for the subsequent chorus'. The first verse seems to have less syllables. There's no rhyming in the chorus. I'm a rhyme addict lol...
.
I get a nice flow from the lyrics, good meter and the dots help show where the sustain/pause occurs.

Looking forward to hearing this with music.....

[TelePaul]

like it alot true! well done.

[true-eurt]

Originally Posted by ido1957

True-ly these are great lyrics.....they express some excellent emotion and sound like they are coming straight from the heart - the best place for lyrics to come from....

Pattern-wise - there are two verses before the first chorus, but only one verse for the subsequent chorus'. The first verse seems to have less syllables. There's no rhyming in the chorus. I'm a rhyme addict lol...
.
I get a nice flow from the lyrics, good meter and the dots help show where the sustain/pause occurs.

Looking forward to hearing this with music.....

Thanks Gerry !!

They are very much from the heart. Superspit actually gave me one of the lines in the chorus, that set the whole song off...it is for him I wrote the song.

Yah...the pattern is a bit weird. The first verse is actually an intro, separate from the other two verses.

I am a rhyme addict myself usually, but when I wrote this... it came out all different. I almost changed it, but thought I would like a little twist to things...so wahlah !!

I am also a dot freak !!!

The music for it is still in the making.

Thanks again Gerry

True

[true-eurt]

Originally Posted by 32-20-Blues

Hey, nice job True.

What does it for me is the "hearing the moon rise [...] tasting the sun", because the descriptions aren't logical, yet they make sense in a 'heightened awareness' kind of way. It's almost like an 'epiphany poem' - when things don't necessarily make sense (in a good way) because of the intensity of what is being experienced.

Anyway, it's good.

Thanks a lot Blues !!

Yah..I have a strange way with interpretation of the heart....especially when it gets intense, as you say.

The sun...moon...wind...seas...fire...seem to be repetitious of my writings.

True

[true-eurt]

Originally Posted by TelePaul

like it alot true! well done.

Thank you very much TelePaul !!!!

True

[wilko]

And I liked it too!

[Sirnothingness]

You taste the sun?????? Damn, I knew your mouth was big, but come on.

[true-eurt]

Originally Posted by myhattbroke

You taste the sun?????? Damn, I knew your mouth was big, but come on.

Oh...wait till I sing...then you will see just how big my mouth really is. The sun taste really good too....Now kindly fock off troll. I will give you some more neg as soon as the rep thingy allows, so don't fret.... Have a nice day.

[Nicole_Rose]

nice lyrics True

can't wait to hear them sung.

[true-eurt]

Originally Posted by Nicole_Rose

nice lyrics True

can't wait to hear them sung.

Thank you Nicole. I can't either...

[RezN8]

Hi True- you are true-lee gifted you know? But honestly that whole thing about 'tasting the rainbow' has been done - it's like a Skittles commercial or something .

Much luv, Rez

[true-eurt]

Originally Posted by wilko

And I liked it too!

Thank you my kiwi friend !!!

[true-eurt]

Originally Posted by RezN8

Hi True- you are true-lee gifted you know? But honestly that whole thing about 'tasting the rainbow' has been done - it's like a Skittles commercial or something .

Much luv, Rez

LOL!!! Well...I was tasting the sun...and only looking at the rainbow...besides, the sun's taste is much hotter than the rainbow...

Hi Rez ! How have you been?

Thank you very much. You are too kind. You gave me a nice giggle too.

Much love to you as well.

[mikeh]

I really enjoyed reading this. It has a 60's vibe to it (This is meant in a good way, I loved living in the 60's - at least the parts I remember)

[true-eurt]

Originally Posted by mikeh

I really enjoyed reading this. It has a 60's vibe to it (This is meant in a good way, I loved living in the 60's - at least the parts I remember)

You and me both !!!

Thanks mikeh !!!

True

[up-fiddler]

Originally Posted by true-eurt

True-ly

Love for love
Heart for heart
Soul for soul
Friend for friend

With a heart to listen
A soul to share
Eyes to witness
We made it there

True 2007

This is the song for me. Simple, rythmic, catchy, and universal. What more can someone ask of a lyric? It will be interesting to hear it to music. Right now I have a melody in my head that just follows this perfectly. I am a huge fan of short phrases with even meter. Good luck on this one my palindromic pal.

[Nakatira]

Some fine words, by a fine dame

[Sirnothingness]

Originally Posted by true-eurt

Now kindly fock off troll

Whoa, do you kiss 60's guy with that mouth?

[true-eurt]

Originally Posted by myhattbroke

Whoa, do you kiss 60's guy with that mouth?

No...but I spit really well with it asshatt....what..you no fock off yet?

[Sirnothingness]

Don't get mad at me because your lyrics suck bad. Just because I don't kiss you wrinkled hairy ass like all the other reppers, doesn't mean you should get angry with me. Golly, you guys are starting to get violent.

[XLR]

Very nice lyrics true-eurt. When you get the melody done let me know if you want some gtr backing.

[60's guy]

Originally Posted by myhattbroke

Whoa, do you kiss 60's guy with that mouth?

True doesn't exactly kiss me, but we do speak with each other frequently via telephone and discuss songwriting, recording, and we also share in conversation concerns of our children and family members.

I love True-eurt!

True is twice the woman your mother was.

[superspit]

nice work True....