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[mjr]

Not titled, and kinda angry...

Here goes...

The pain is only in your mind
You play the game, but you're behind
think you'll win, you'll only lose
your dominance will keep you down.

I know how the game is played
I'm the master of illusion
I let you believe how you will
Your downfall is your delusion

Your victory is your defeat
unaware, so you press on
In your own world you reside
Standing on a pedestal is victory in your eyes.

Think you know me but you don't
I control what's been revealed.
What is known and what is shown
the advantage belongs to me.

What's the name of your game?
Oppression makes you feel as a king,
One-upmanship inflates your ego
Either way you'll lose the same.

Victory will be mine.
Defeat will stare into your eyes.
Your victory meets it's demise.
I control my own destiny.

The game has been played. (x 4)

Game over.

[ido1957]

A bit angry, yes, but it reads well and gets a strong message across. Those are the songs that tend to hit home with the listener. Have you any ideas for the type of song yet? Slow, fast, etc?

[mjr]

Originally Posted by ido1957

A bit angry, yes, but it reads well and gets a strong message across. Those are the songs that tend to hit home with the listener. Have you any ideas for the type of song yet? Slow, fast, etc?

Don't know about tempo...probably hard rock/metal...something driving and "angry", I suppose. Maybe something along the lines of "King Nothing" from Metallica...

[ido1957]

Cool - I'm no connoiseur of metallica but hard rock sounds good for these lyrics....

[mjr]

Originally Posted by ido1957

Cool - I'm no connoiseur of metallica but hard rock sounds good for these lyrics....

King Nothing sounds kinda like this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iDCbMRytppM