new tune -- feedback please!

[famous beagle]

Hey Y'all,

This is one I wrote and recorded really quickly (in about 5 hours start-to-finish) when my wife's B-day present that I ordered online hadn't arrived yet.

Warning: it's a little mushy.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=328768

It's called "Allison (Dream About You)"

Thanks!

[mjr]

Originally Posted by famous beagle

Hey Y'all,

This is one I wrote and recorded really quickly (in about 5 hours start-to-finish) when my wife's B-day present that I ordered online hadn't arrived yet.

Warning: it's a little mushy.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=328768

It's called "Allison (Dream About You)"

Thanks!

Through my crappy headphones, sounds like a great tune! I'm sure your wife will love it!

[ido1957]

Very good song Chad. This is a great present for your wife. I know she'll love it!

[Anfontan]

Nice indeed!! Mrs. Beagle will love it for sure!

Hmmm....my wife's birthday is in 2 days, I better start writing too!

[Emusic]

It´s good. Thats all there is to say

[famous beagle]

Thanks everyone, and yes Mrs. Beagle did love it. (She's sending it to all her friends and putting it on her myspace page.)

[up-fiddler]

"When I need to find my way
I don’t need the sun or the help of no one
Because it wouldn’t matter anyway
If it’s not near you, I wouldn’t follow"

This verse knocks me out. Wish I had written it and I don't say that very often. Nice job.

[famous beagle]

Originally Posted by up-fiddler

"When I need to find my way
I don’t need the sun or the help of no one
Because it wouldn’t matter anyway
If it’s not near you, I wouldn’t follow"

This verse knocks me out. Wish I had written it and I don't say that very often. Nice job.

Hey, thanks very much!

[HPD593]

Really great tune! I really enjoyed it.