New Beat "Fallen Soldier"

[DesertEase]

I think i'ma change the intro but other than that lemme know wut ya'll think about this one

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=4689973&q=hi

[stray411]

That’s a wild sample right there…I’m not feeling the verse part as much as the hook/intro…but it probably just needs an MC. Drums banging nicely. I like this.

Hit my thread if you get a chance.

[Mindset]

real nice beat son. I like how the snare & hi hats were panned. Gave a good amount of depth with the reverb of the snare.

[Change of POETS]

There's an abrupt Key change in the guitar sample from the hook to verse, which throws the whole tone of the track off to me. Something about that key change is not working, it almost sounds like the sample was altered in one spot, and the tune is wrong.

Other than that, I like it. Just that sample out of tune, is not working.

[Noddy301]

Them Drums Bangin my dude...this probably needs vocals but it is like a WHOLE new song from hook to verse...my be u should fade the verse guitar melody in to give a more smoother approach...ya dig...

[DesertEase]

Thanks for the feedback everyone i see there is a lot of diff. opinions about this one, If i could get one of you Emcees to flow on this track and send me the vocals it would be a lot easier for me to finalize this beat and make the neccessary changes...Any takers?

[Mindset]

I'll take that offer lol, I got a few people who can do it too.

[DesertEase]

ight then it's a done deal then send me the vocals when you are finished recording and i'll arrange it all together and post up the finalized project....did you download the beat or do you need it sent to you?

[Mindset]

naw I didn't download it yet, probably gotta send it to me... president@mindsetentertainmentinc.net

[DesertEase]

Mindset the beat has been sent my homie

[Mindset]

Thanks dogg. Just to warn you, I don't write my lyrics in an hour lol. It'll take me a few days minimum, unless it's just one of those days where all flows through. Usually I'll sit down and think of every word I say, and how it can accompany the next word I'll speak down the road so to speak

[DesertEase]

do you playa just make sure u send me 2 copies one just vocals and the other your vocals on the beat so i know how you want it