At it again... Step by step help with JazzMang

[JazzMang]

Alright folks, I've been gone for a while.
I've been writing a new song, only have this one section presentable at this time.

I will keep uploading new additions, etc... until the song is complete.


Here is the 1st bridge only...

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=5169

Give me your suggestions/comments/praise/hatred/etc...


Thanks!

JazzMang

[rayc]

I like the sound especially at the end where you either trem or bang around the selector switch.
Be careful you don't get too much U2 ringing in there though.

[JazzMang]

Added more, longer clip...

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=5185

[bigbubba]

Long time man.

Sounds really cool. Now put some lyrics to it and tell people where to download it.



Edit: The second link is not playing.

[JazzMang]

Sorry bout the bad link.
New one:

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=5193

[true-eurt]

Hi JaZZzzzzz....long long time. Too long....but I can't say that for the clip. It its way too short to really give much critic on. Much MOre please.

It is difficult for me to critic your tunes, because I am partial, but will do my best to be impartial.

Ahhhh..you are off on a slightly different path with your music. It still has your sig all over it though.

Using the electric(could be elec acoustic, but sounds more elec to me) gives it a mellow, yet energetic feel.

I also like the matter of fact rhythm you have going.

Nice subtle lead short sustain going on with the lead, supporting the ryhthm throughout.

Love the build-up to the lead melody that comes in at 00:38. It comes off real smooth and natural.

The high-hats sound perfect in volume and placement. When/if you add full drums or any other instruments, you may have to up that volume, so as not to bury them. I think they are a very important part of this tune...although subtle. In fact the subtleness seems to be the drawing factor. Like the little sprinkles one puts on the icing on a cake. They are not the main ingredient, and it really isn't their flavour they are used for but more of an eye candy. In this case, the high-hats are ear candy.

I would love to hear the other side of 00:50 where I catch a tease of the some bass ?

I want to hear your vox...that is your greatest gift. It wows me every time...not that your instrumental prowness is weak or anything.

I really would like to hear a more indepth clip though....please.

Now please tell me, if I have heard non-existant instruments or missed any.

True

[bigwillz24]

Hey jazz I'm listening at work on crap speakers but the only thing i'd like to point out is that there is a somewhat ear piercing lead guitar in there. try a cut in the 1k-3k area. Other than that it's good from what I can hear from a mono cpu speaker.