I Need Opinions On My Song Please.....

[14yearoldkid]

i just put up MY own myspace...my band also has a myspace but i decided to put up my own with my own music so please give ur opinion on the song thanks!

www.myspace.com/bryanandrade1

[Calwood]

For some reason I always have trouble with myspace pages. Nevertheless,..from what I could here of the music,....
I thought it was well written but still could use some more work.
The guitar was out of tune.
The vocal went off pitch in alot of places.


Overall though,..nice acoustic idea for a song. I like it.

take 'er easy,..
Calwood

[14yearoldkid]

awesome man thanks for listening...just a question how much of the song did u get into ? did u get to the chorus?
thanks again

[Calwood]

yeah,..I heard parts of the chorus.

[14yearoldkid]

oo ok i was just wondering thats cool well thanks for listening!!
bryan

[VSpaceBoy]

Well.. it kinda drags some. Might benefit from going half time at the chorus or something.

[14yearoldkid]

oo yeah i guess ur right well thanks for listening

[sikter]

Just listening”I let her go”
Great song! You are really talented.
You just need to retrack everything track by track.
Don’t forget record bass too.
I hear here a trio performing live in a small room, two guitars and drums not sounding too nice but little more practising on vocals and timing and you‘ll get a great song.

I remember you talking about going to studio.
It was a while ago and I don’t remember if it was the same song.
How did it go anyway?

Good luck!
sikter

[Strokes77]

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