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Feedback please on these lyrics
I would like to get some feedback on these lyrics. I've started to write the music but it's not done yet. All I know is that it's in the key of G so far (lol) and it'll probably be a slower tempo tune.....Thanks
Friends Verse 1 Seems so long ago, we first walked along this road Wondering to ourselves what was it all about Trying to find our way, we were strangers to this place Didn’t know too much ‘bout what was going on Then you looked my way, and your smile it gave me strength And I was glad someone like you had come around And I realized a friend was what I’d found Verse 2 We had our share of days, things just didn’t go our way Couldn’t understand cause it was all so new Didn’t last too long, you always kept me strong We’d work it out together always make it through Took adversity, turned it into victory You were there for me and I was there for you And I realized that’s what a friend will do Bridge Remembering the time we’ve been together With photographs and pictures in my mind I’ll keep these memories with me forever Even though we have to leave this all behind Verse 3 Now my friend we find, we’re at a crossroad in our lives We’re leaving this behind it’s on to something new We might drift apart but you’re always in my heart It’s time to celebrate and raise a glass or two Yes and here today, there’s so much I want to say Just remember all the good times we’ve been through Cause there’s no better friends than me and you |
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I dig 'em....I like the fact that they could be directed towards a man or a woman.
...they have a bittersweet quality to them.
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The lyrics are good. They look like they would need some good backing instruments behind them, and a fairly powerful voice. But the words sound like their coming stright from you, which is good!
And i agree with Brandrum about how they can be directed towards a man or woman, which was well done.
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It's got kind of a Stevie Ray Vaughan "Life by The Drop" feel to it. I like it.
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