20DollarBeats.com Promo - Feedback Wanted

[djdownload]

Hey all, I did a colab with QB, can you guys give me some feedback on it?
This will be a "theme" version for the site, most likely in a flash piece also
be on a "featured artist" page.
Let me know how it sounds (quality, creativity etc.)

20Dollarbeats.com Promo featuring qb2k5 spittin.
http://www.20dollarbeats.com/demos/20DB_promo.mp3

Thanks guys
R

[REEK BROCK]

Whats up.I like the whole concept.The beat is good but I'd use one that would get more attention.Its a first impression.The dude rapping is cool but it seems like he's rushing through a few lines.i hope I'm not being too critical but as a representation of your business I know that you want it as "perfect as possible.How about using your most slamming track while a lady with a real sexy voice talks about the beats.Most of your clients are probably me and you know what they say sex sells.Dude is tight though.

[djdownload]

Thanks for the feedback. I agree that maybe using the girl might be better. I will have to try it out and see. I may use both and alternate them no? I am working on some video to go with it as well, maybe that will draw more attention. thanks for the feedback.