Rate my remix of Oh Girl by Paul Wall.

[ItzCashew]

[Chorus: sped-up sample of "Oh Girl" by the Chi-Lites]
Ohhh girl, I'd be in trouble if you left me now
Cause I don't know where to look for love, I just don't know how
Ohhhhhhhh girl, I'd be in trouble if you left me now
Cause I don't know where to look for love, I just don't know how
Ohhhh.. {*cut off and echoes*}

[Verse 1]
Started off we were two friends in school
Talking and passing notes we were cool
U had a boyfriend at the time but he didnt care
Funny that he disrespect you while im always there
U used to call me at night try to dry your tears
But i always comfort you whisphering into your ear
I knew how to make you laugh, I knew how to make you smile
I wanted to make you mine just to be around for awhile
But cheating in a relationship aint ur style
The worst part is knowing that we love each other
But too bad we can never be together
People started talking spreading rumors though
Caught ur mans ear and he threw u out in the cold
to sabotage your happiness and blame me
I told you to forget him but you just told me to leave
You told me that i just couldnt see
This wouldnt have happened if i had let it be

[Chorus]

[Verse 2]
Since then we haven't spoken in a while
Everyday i wanted to get the phone and give u a dial
Just to listen in and hear your voice again
So maybe i be forgiven and see what u've been missin'
But wishing aint gonna make it happen
I had a vision about heaven with us in it
Forget the past baby just live in the present
I just want to have you back with me this instant
I can make u laugh, I can make u smile
And all the while you've been in denial
I ain't askin much, baby i just wanna be real
Its just a simple question baby to see how you really feel
Dont listen to other people they just bull ****in'
I would never be thinkin' about replacin'
I waited for some long and now i got a chance
We can finally get lost with each other in romance
I love you baby

[Chorus] - 2.5X w/o cut-off until last 1/2 repeat

This is a rough draft so sugggestions is deeply appreciated. Thanks.